If i could travel back to an era in time it would be:
I would go back to the stone age so i could teach the pre-historic man to do math, reading and writing i would also teach them lots of stuff so then the modern world will be more civilised and smarter.
I would also go back so I could see my ancestors.
I would also teach them how to make clothing so that they would not freeze.
If I could cook delicious meals i would bring food with me and give it to them as well as teaching them how to cook.
If I could go back I would also like to be able to make best friend’s and be able to see the tragic times that they have. I would also love to see how free the world was back then and how they lived. If i took a map with me i might become the first person to discover NZ, That would be awesome.
I would also want to learn how they eat and i might even be able to teach them english.
But before i go i would want to become a scientist and get a diploma this means i would actually be able to travel back in time because i could make one. I would also study the life of the pre-historic man so that i know everything about them and don’t get myself killed.
I also want to be careful i do not change anything just in case i muddle up time and find out that i am not alive any more
Good job your piece of writing is very good and very descriptive. I like your Idea about going back to the stone age to teach them some things and to see your ancestors and how you wanted to see what the world was like back then. Your punctuating is very good and you remembered the basics like full stops and capital letters. I also like how you said that you're not going to change things because that could mean not being alive in the era you came from. So overall good job and keep doing good writing.
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